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Telegram From Lethargy

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Lie down but don't sleep
Brain buzzing poor body prone
Just how I like you

I will be here until your
Vitality crumbles, then...
Just a quick entry for TheWritePlace's prompt on 'lassitude'. Also my first attempt at a tanka (and definitely not my last - this is fun!). Enjoy!

I had so much to say about my fatigue, but I felt like it should be expressed in less words than usual, so I did this. I was originally going to make another slam poem, but every draft just felt too insincere.
Brevity isn't just the soul of wit: sometimes it's the soul of your moods.
tres deep ladz
think on
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Oooooh, nice and chilling. :D